Posted by J on December 25, 1998 at 11:39
In Reply to: Re: Marion: a story posted by dejay on December 24, 1998 at 21:13
Eroticism arrives in many forms and shapes,
deejay. I have to be honest that I did not
examine this story til I saw your comments
about it, and then thought is he being fair
here?
It is really understated, but after I
sat and examined it closely, it was quite nice
indeed. Sort of the difference between XXX
stuff and soft core. If I didn't know better
I would have to say it was written by or for
a woman.
But the thing that really got to me was the
heroine had her long blonde hair "in a single
plait." Two of my favorite things, beside having
her flood her swimsuit.
Deejay thank you for drawing my attention to the
story; your comments were not over harsh about it.
Anon - do please write more here, your efforts
are enjoyed and use whatever style is *you*,
this obviously took some time to put together
and I thank you for your work!