Posted by Pro Author on September 05, 2004 at 14:20 [209.145.238.110]
In Reply to: Re: A MATURE diaper story. posted by Pro Author on September 05, 2004 at 13:19
Whoh!
Don't take it so personal. I just pointed it out so you'd think about it the next time you wrote. I wasn't slamming you or the story.
Look, all of us "professionals" had to put our stuff out there for criticism, it made us better writers and editors, that's how we became pros.
Wouldn't it be fun if we posted here and then others took our stories and made them better? The same story could have many permutations, and be better and better as folks worked on it. Five or six beautifully written stories, as opposed to 100 half done ideas.
You said you had spent 4-5 hours on this. That's great for a first draft, but a finished product is gonna take a lot more time. You have talent, but time is the key to all good writing.
Peace Out,
Editorzero
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