Posted by Pro Author on September 05, 2004 at 13:19 [209.145.238.110]
In Reply to: A MATURE diaper story. posted by Six Gun on September 05, 2004 at 00:22
"I hear the incessant buzzing coming from the alarm clock. My eyes open warily only to find the room bathed in sunlight already".
Hanging modifier, not a good start. A
professional writer would probably have
written this sentence as:
"I hear the incessant buzzing from the alarm clock. Warily my eyes open only to find the room already bathed in sunlight".
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