Posted by Cilla on January 07, 1999 at 13:10
In Reply to: Re: Oh, come on. Tell the truth! posted by The Proffesional - Professional on January 07, 1999 at 00:02
1) Given your lack of basic writing skills, and with letter-writing being an important part of running a business, I think that you would need to be looking for a secretary with better qualifications than being so totally receptive to your uro-sadistic fantasies.
2) The 2 characters in this story are totally unsympathetic and not very credible.
3)The time-scale of the story defies belief, seeming only to serve the necessity of bringing the woman to the point of wetting herself.
4) As an active trade-unionist, constantly striving for better workers' rights, I found the employment conditions described in your story totally abhorrent. You sound like the boss from hell. In fact you seem totally unprofessional, making you choice of "nome" inapt as well as inept! Yes, there are bosses who treat their staff poorly. Thankfully there is legislation to see that they get punished for so doing. Writers who treat their female characters poorly do not have to worry about any legislation, but they should expect to receive a fair degree of condemnation for such a negative and unappealing portrayal of a woman as that found in your story.
The freedom that you enjoy to post such a story on this site also applies to those who find it objectionable. I don't agree with timmy who seems to think that the only worthwhile responses are those of the "Wow, gosh, great story, keep posting" variety. If Wet Setters feel annoyed or angry about something they should come out and say so, as gbuu did. Perhaps having a go at your lack of literary skills was a cheap shot but if you insist on blaming them on poor typing then you leave yourself open to attack, especially when your honesty regarding the reality of the original story has been called into question.
Sure, post other stories, but if others don't agree with your philosophy I hope you come up with something a little better than just saying that they don't know "wat" they are "taking" about.
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