Posted by Eileena on December 27, 1998 at 16:25
In Reply to: Re: Story time-my first-be kind! posted by dejay on December 27, 1998 at 15:55
Deejay wrote: Boy, what a great perdiciment for desperation fans, being stuck in a locked stairway and
desperate to pee. Good thing she got out of the stairway before she had an accident in her
pants huh?
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My comment:
Any suggestions for how else to make desparation more realistic are happily accepted. And, if you read the entire thing-she did have the accident, just not in the stairwell. How else can one be desparate, unless, for some reason, they are unable, or kept from getting to a bathroom?
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Deejay wrote:
Thanks for the story Eleena but remember next time (and I hope there will be a next
time) you can't use the excuse of it being your first story so it better be a good one.
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my comment:
Well, if it's not, I'm sure you will be kind enough to point it out ;)
Eileena
Email: eileena@patches.net