Posted by TechType on November 01, 2004 at 23:38 [209.137.247.94]
In Reply to: "Freshman Training" part 1 posted by Marquis deSodden on October 30, 2004 at 21:38
THAT was an --->excellent<--- story. It is such a vivid fantasy. I really liked the combination of spankings, panty-pooping, and humiliation. Dang, I feel like a total perv enjoying that story so much. Please go on to write a part 2, and a part 3, and as many as it takes. As for the other comment (about the paragraph), I could read your story very well; forum posting boxes and the tab-key just don't get along well. The few grammatical and spelling errors that existed did not dissuade me one bit from the images being portayed. You have great flow to your writing and the story's voice is both realistically informal (as in actual dialogue) and intelligently constructed. BTW, your name doesn't happen to be a play of the name "Mark DeSade" by any chance... he runs a spanking site and it wouldn't seem far-fetched that he might have other "interests". Just curious. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next .
-TechType
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