Posted by theFlax on June 12, 2002 at 15:29
In Reply to: Franny's Choice lV posted by theFlax on June 12, 2002 at 03:19
Just realized a flaw in this chapter and thought I'd point it out so you all could watch for it. In the begginning of the chapter Franny's laying naked on the bed. Then later when she's in the kitchen with Ellen she completely dressed even though she never got dressed at all. Oh well, must have been one of those magical walk through closets that paste clothes on you as you pass through. Oops how'd that happen.
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