Posted by Dill Pickle on September 09, 2004 at 19:43 [64.12.117.15]
In Reply to: Nobody liked my story? Should I continue it? or n posted by Hey you guys on September 09, 2004 at 19:06
My pickled brain enjoyed the story, but says if you'd use a few paragraphs to organize it, it might read a little better. But, if you're just a LG, you may not know about that yet! ;-)
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