Posted by Christy on October 22, 2003 at 16:01 [209.109.227.78]
In Reply to: Chloe's nappy posted by Michael Duke on October 21, 2003 at 02:17
It's not horrible -- just needs some work. A little more development and depth would be good. Maybe I just like the longer stories you can really get involved in. It's a good premise. Why not work on it some more and see if you can expand it a bit so it's not so abrupt.
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