Posted by just sayin on November 16, 2009 at 19:14 [71.67.108.250]
In Reply to: Zeke and Lily - Making a Memory (Chapter Ten) posted by Zorro Daddy on November 16, 2009 at 16:51
It's an enjoyable story and all, but you've teased us with this mystery illness being revealed how many times now? There is such a thing as leading your readers on too long, and it's really getting to the point to being an anti-climax.