Posted by Darkman on July 21, 2010 at 20:31 [71.233.82.42]
In Reply to: Re: tale of the cursed panties continued PRT3 posted by pantiespooper on July 21, 2010 at 09:27
Never said I was unsatified, just being honest about how I felt. I'm sure Heather is well aware that it's not gonna impress everyone, but to pull my punches with a review would be an insult both to writing as a whole and the author themself. The only way for one to grow in their chosen profession to have their mistakes shown to them without any hand holding, but still with consideration (note that I never said that would she should stop writing period). I merely wanted to point out that for a long running story to work, it needs to build up it's character rather than just saying 'here's a girl' and then having stuff happen. Being critical and being able to handle it are necessary tools for any writer if they truly wish to pursue as a major part of their life.
All that I hope to accomplish is inspiration for Heather to push her skills further, so that the truly harsh critics (and trust me, I was kind compared to what some others might have been) will have their socks knocked off.
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